Need A Script Editor For A Non-traditional Screenplay

January 20, 2019
Client: Alex, (Canada), Upwork
Job: Screen writing experience would be major. Here is what I am looking for: I wrote a movie and I am not the best writer and screenwriter, so I need it written better or worked out to be more suitable. I need help setting up a structure for the entire script. I still want it to be told like a story, but I need the dialogue in script format. Just send first few pages once they are edited and we can see if you’re going in the right direction, because I am not sure what direction to even go in. Thanks.
Skill Requirement: Content Writing, Creative Writing, English Proofreading, Help setting structure to the entire script.
Completed: January 25, 2019

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